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Poetry
Jun 3, 2005 21:20:07 GMT -5
Post by samkingotdeleted on Jun 3, 2005 21:20:07 GMT -5
I'm going to be doing a poetry unit in school. I stink at poetry I tried to write a poem for the girl I liked ( I haven't asked her out I am to shy), but I couldn't think of anything. Jinx your good at poetry aren't you.
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Poetry
Jun 3, 2005 22:53:25 GMT -5
Post by Cerridwen on Jun 3, 2005 22:53:25 GMT -5
Yes, but I'm also a writer and an artist. Some people have a greater creative capacity than others. Analytical people have a much harder time with creating things than those who have a natural apptitued for creativity. It's one of those things that you're just born with, though it can be leaned through great difficulty. I just write what I feel great emotion about. Most of my poetry is dark, depressing and quite dismal because I have had a good bit of darkness in my life and has only begun to lighten up within the past year or so...about the time I met the guy I'm with now. There are also many types of poetry, and not all of it has to rhyme. They type that I write is free form which means that it almost never rhymes but it does have a certain beat to it. I could never write decent poetry that rhymed. Either way, good luck. If you want me to look at some of your stuff just send it to me and I'll tell you what I think and maybe give you some advice....
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Poetry
Jun 4, 2005 1:39:49 GMT -5
Post by hessper on Jun 4, 2005 1:39:49 GMT -5
;Di cant really rhym them but my poems are usually about the enviroment and nature this is my best one so far please do not steal it i think it would be better if sung but i havn't thought any notes up for it If you ask where the birds go, When you chase them up high, Through the rich blue tapestry lying above, You shall find your answer here.
The canary with its voice so sweet, Flutters and soars in the sky, Those shining sparks, Flutter and soar to the sun, Those flaming chips that fly over-head, Belong to the sun.
The dark and mysterious wood pigeon, Climbs its way up the ladder called flight, It creeps to the storm clouds where all pigeons go, Its croon reunites to form thunder its eyes bight and lively, Reflect In the sun, Casting a beam over the sky.
The cardinal the rose of the sky, Jewelled with diamonds of sparkling dew, It swirls at the horizon in a beautiful pattern, Forming the beauty of sunset.
The snowy owl, Flies to eternity, And shimmers and glows in the sky, The stars the beautiful stars.
But the moon you ask the transforming one, That changes from tooth to silvery claw, This magnificent creature is not a bird, It’s a creature they call a wolf.
How did it get their nobody knows, Perhaps on the back of an eagle.
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Poetry
Jun 4, 2005 6:39:08 GMT -5
Post by samkingotdeleted on Jun 4, 2005 6:39:08 GMT -5
I get all the machanics and stuff, and I usually am [glow=red,2,300]very[/glow] creative. I just can't mix the analasis of making shore that have proper structure, with the creativety of making a good poem.
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Poetry
Jun 4, 2005 7:29:29 GMT -5
Post by hessper on Jun 4, 2005 7:29:29 GMT -5
i think we all have our weak points a good trick is to tell a story and then put into form of a poem eg: they discovered an island the sand was gold that one is really bad but that trick may help
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Poetry
Jun 4, 2005 8:07:05 GMT -5
Post by samkingotdeleted on Jun 4, 2005 8:07:05 GMT -5
My techer would call that crap she likes poetry
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Poetry
Jun 6, 2005 16:09:06 GMT -5
Post by samkingotdeleted on Jun 6, 2005 16:09:06 GMT -5
I am so lucky my teacher went on the eigth grade class trip so no poetry till monday
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Poetry
Jun 7, 2005 17:17:10 GMT -5
Post by coconutpenguin7 on Jun 7, 2005 17:17:10 GMT -5
booyah 4 u..... wait a minute!!! r u still in school?
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Poetry
Jun 8, 2005 6:12:19 GMT -5
Post by samkingotdeleted on Jun 8, 2005 6:12:19 GMT -5
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Poetry
Jun 8, 2005 12:26:00 GMT -5
Post by LordStripetail on Jun 8, 2005 12:26:00 GMT -5
I'm Ok At Poetry but I'm not great. LoRd StRipetail
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Poetry
Jun 8, 2005 23:32:47 GMT -5
Post by Cerridwen on Jun 8, 2005 23:32:47 GMT -5
Mine is usually very emotional and thought provoking.
Deny Me Not
Oh the aching of my soul Which unto you is unknown The silent tears which you do not see The pain that which none can feel The silvery scars that only mine eyes can see These pains and woes are nothing to you
You mock me You scorn me Yet I do everything for you You shun me You reject me Yet all that I ask is that you respect me
Is this simple thing which I ask So hard for you to give me It is no medal, no noble honour Only the simplest of things I have worked my hardest to earn
Yet still you deny it You would not understand the grief That you cause me You shun me You underestimate me Why do you do this to me Why do you deny me the only thing I have wanted Why?
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Poetry
Jun 9, 2005 11:12:42 GMT -5
Post by bipod on Jun 9, 2005 11:12:42 GMT -5
i used to rite poetry but now just songs and stuff
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Poetry
Jun 10, 2005 6:09:15 GMT -5
Post by samkingotdeleted on Jun 10, 2005 6:09:15 GMT -5
Jinx is makin me look bad
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Poetry
Jun 10, 2005 15:49:13 GMT -5
Post by hessper on Jun 10, 2005 15:49:13 GMT -5
CERRIDWEN THAT IS SUCH A GOOD PIECE OF POETRY WHERE DID YOU GET THE IDEA
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Poetry
Jun 10, 2005 23:46:24 GMT -5
Post by Cerridwen on Jun 10, 2005 23:46:24 GMT -5
I write of my life, of how I feel and what I've had to go through. I've lived through a rough lot.....been around the block a few times. My current poem list consists of "Wanting, Wishing, Failing"; "The Little Dreamer"; "Never More"; "Lindenlure"; "Empty"; "Deny Me Not"; and a recent one that I think I titled "Keeper of Light". I write of the raw feelings of rejection, betrayal by those closest to you and that you are supposed to trust, hate, fear, abandonment, and the want of acceptance. Only recently I've started to incorporate a new feeling, the feeling that comes when you know someone honestly cares for you, that one was expressed in "Keeper of Light".
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