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Ark
Jul 21, 2005 7:02:09 GMT -5
Post by Redstripe the Strong on Jul 21, 2005 7:02:09 GMT -5
Name:Ark Angel Species:White Tiger (If allowed) Age:34 Weapons: Katana and shurikens and some magical abilitys. Family:none
Physical: A muscular White tiger a head taller then full sized wolves has white wings (explained in history) wears a ninja outfit with a hood(not always worn.)
Persona: A kind person to freind but a deadly Assassin, holds no grudges won't attack until attacked first unless on a mission.
History: Ark hails from a distant land his father was a scientis of sorts just starting to understand complex fusion and refossilization when an explosin killed him leaving Ark mutated. Ever since Ark has explored and trained as hard as he could he is seeking Lord Stripetail to ask about the removel of his wings.
Special: He can fly but not to high or far his wings are weak but he might get stronger.
I wont add him to any Rps until approved.
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Ark
Jul 21, 2005 21:06:55 GMT -5
Post by LordStripetail on Jul 21, 2005 21:06:55 GMT -5
i think You should add him to the deren the Traitor Rp, Read what we've posted and try to blend yoour entrance in (Like : As Stripetail and Deren reached the town, they saw a large tiger coming towards them). Try and add detail too, one line pposts don;t add much to the flow of the story. Lord Stripetail
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Ark
Jul 22, 2005 14:06:58 GMT -5
Post by Redstripe the Strong on Jul 22, 2005 14:06:58 GMT -5
thanks i will add him and i know what you mean unless there is nothing more to add to a story one lines are really lame.
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Ark
Jul 22, 2005 15:21:06 GMT -5
Post by LordStripetail on Jul 22, 2005 15:21:06 GMT -5
You're welcome. I always try to keep the stories flow going, but it can be tough at times.
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Ark
Jul 22, 2005 15:28:24 GMT -5
Post by Redstripe the Strong on Jul 22, 2005 15:28:24 GMT -5
I know like when at a lose of words.
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